From Jeimi, Age 17 - 12/15/07 - IP#: 67.87.194.xxx  Click here to reply  
Ht. 5'2", Start: 240 lb, Today: 230 lb, Goal: 180 lb - Hey guys this doesn't really have anything to do with weight lose but can you guys rate this poem i wrote from 1-10 it doesn't matter if ya don't like i just need the truth because i send it to some compettion there just waiting if i got in but tell me what ya think please and thank you!! :)
COVERS
We’re all the same with different souls.
What we have outside is just a cover.
Never judge what you can’t see judge what you can feel, what you hear.
You don’t know someone until they express what they feel, what they think.
We all think it’s important to have nice covers, but what’s the point of looking nice when deep inside it doesn’t reflect what you see outside.
So when you judge someone look beyond what you see.
You want people to like you for who you are and what you do, not what you look or what you wear because that’s just a cover.
The real you goes beyond those things, at the end no one will thank you for being pretty or dressing nice, they’ll be thankful for being an inspiration.